MARIAM YOU HAVE EDITED TOGETHER THE CLIPS WELL AND ADDED SOUNDS TO MAKE IT MORE ATMOSPHERIC THIS IS A merit
To make it even better you could add DIAGETIC sounds which help show what is happening. Think about adding the sounds of doors, footsteps and thuds as she is beaten
MARIAM
ReplyDeleteYOU HAVE EDITED TOGETHER THE CLIPS WELL AND ADDED SOUNDS TO MAKE IT MORE ATMOSPHERIC
THIS IS A merit
To make it even better you could add DIAGETIC sounds which help show what is happening. Think about adding the sounds of doors, footsteps and thuds as she is beaten
Mr MOnahan